[Art Week #12] Any ideas how to improve this before I start with the lineart?

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I've been practicing my digital art recently, and decided to practice with some ABXY Girl. Please tell me what I can do to improve!

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Two Hot Blondes Hunt For Big Black Cocks (art-style improves and changes through-out the comic)

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Home Improvement

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